There are many different choose for people to have a dinner or lunch in these day. Some people choose eat in a restaurant, some may choose eat at home. I prefer to eat at home for three reasons. I believe that eat at home can be healthier, cheaper and more convenient.
First, the menu is set by my own. I would try myself to have balanced food in each menu. Also, I would choose something that I want to eat. And I believe that eating at home has better environmental sanitation.
Second, I believe that eating at home would be cheaper than eating outside. I buy the food ingredients and I will know how much this menu would cost. If it is out of my budget, I can change the food ingredients.
Third, I don’t have to worry about where to have my lunch or dinner. I don’t have to worry about the weather is good or not, because I don’t have to go outside for the menu. I would having my dinner while I watching TV. I feel comfortable when I eating at home.
Last, everyone has his or her own opinion about eat in or eat out. For me, I would rather eat at home, because I think it is healthier, cheaper and also more convenient to me. And that’s why I choose eat in.
First, the menu is set by my own. I would try myself to have balanced food in each menu. Also, I would choose something that I want to eat. And I believe that eating at home has better environmental sanitation.
Second, I believe that eating at home would be cheaper than eating outside. I buy the food ingredients and I will know how much this menu would cost. If it is out of my budget, I can change the food ingredients.
Third, I don’t have to worry about where to have my lunch or dinner. I don’t have to worry about the weather is good or not, because I don’t have to go outside for the menu. I would having my dinner while I watching TV. I feel comfortable when I eating at home.
Last, everyone has his or her own opinion about eat in or eat out. For me, I would rather eat at home, because I think it is healthier, cheaper and also more convenient to me. And that’s why I choose eat in.
Hi,Fora!
回覆刪除I like your depiction and word choices very much!
But I think you can write more about your choice of eat in, for example, the sanitation you just mentioned. The last thing is some spelling may not be correct, so just take a look. Major in English and Japanese is very difficult job, but I think you do it very well!
Sincerely yours, Peter
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回覆刪除Hi Flora
回覆刪除I like your organization toward this essay. Also, your ideas are good to support this essay.
By Jack
Hi~ Flora
回覆刪除I think your article is great. You talk about
more advantages to eat in, I really agree with
your opinions and thinkings. Maybe you can use more examples to let readers know that eat in is the best choice. Than, your blog is neat! Do your best!^^
By Claire
Hi beautiful Flora
回覆刪除The structure is distinct. It is in good order and with good reasoning. The reader can easily read and understand what the meaning of this eassy. Eat in is good.
Lala
Hello Flora!
回覆刪除I like your article. Your structure and organization is well done. Your reason is distinct. I like it.
hey~girl!!
回覆刪除both of us like to eat in, and so does peggy, maybe w need to have a kitchen, by this way, we could fullfilled our dream.Back to the main point, you wrot a perfect article, but if you tell more in every paragraph, it would become better.
>>by sharon
Oh Flora,
回覆刪除I love your compisision very much. You did a good job! =)