
Almost every person wants to live longer. In fact, people do live longer today than they did in the past. Statistical date shows that the Japanese is the race that live longest so far. The average of how long people live in Japan is about eighty years old. There have three main reasons that cause the phenomenon of people live longer than the past.
First, compare the past and nowadays, there were much fewer doctors in the past. And the knowledge of the medical was less than today. Because it was short of doctors in the past, only the rich can see the doctor when they get sick. Many poor people died of diseases. Today, people attach importance to health. And almost everyone has health insurance and can see the doctor when they feel uncomfortable or get flu. In brief, people have better medical care these days.
Second, the progress of technology is fast. New medical and new ways of cure diseases have been founding for the patients. Doctors are still doing research to help the diseases that can’t be cure in the past. Also, thanks to the better technology, people can live in a more convenient and safer life. People can use the machines to do something dangerous so that people live safer than they did in the past.
Third, people live in a better living environment than the past. People know that good living environment can make people feel better. And people also know the importance of the environment. So that, people would keep the house clean and sweep away the dirty things.
To sum up, the reason why people can live longer than the past not only because the living condition were tough, but also people have better medical care, better technology and better living environment these days. And as the change of the times, the living condition will keep improving. Maybe people can live even longer than they do now.
Hi, I'm Fred.
回覆刪除In my thought, you made a great essay. You introduce the difference from the past, and emphasize the specail difference nowadays.